Sunday, 28 June 2009

  • A Minor Blues, Chapter 1

    Someone has to write my first novel, it may as well be me. This idea has been fermenting in my brain for a couple of years. It is now either ripe or rotten, but that is for my readers to say. A single-sentence synopsis might read as follows: A dedicated but mediocre musician records the greatest album never released.    Or: Jack gets paid to eat barbecue and listen to the blues. Nice work if you can get it.

     

     

    "Everybody hits at least one home run. No matter what the game is, you
    hear me? The thing is, you gotta play all the time. Cause sure as shit,
    you ain't gonna be lucky and show up only on the nights you shine
    ."--
    Delano 'Spoondog' Partlow
     
    Convict #126578, Delano Partlow, NMI. Aliases- Spoondog, Spoon, Spoonboy,
    Roosevelt, Tiger
    . b. 1919, d. October 19, 1942. Served 17 months of a
    12-year sentence for B&E of a private residence. Burned BR in kitchen
    fire. Buried in pauper's grave on grounds.--from the archives of the
    Arkansas State Prison at Cummins, AK
     
    "Although slightly out of tune and a bit derivative, Spoondog and the
    Dogmen's infectious enthusiasm woke up the crowd and got them ready for
    the main attraction. Yes, it was definitely Muddy's night
    ...." from a
    music review in The Tunica Weekly News, Monday, January 27, 1950
     
    "You want me to find a guy who's died three times, the last time over
    forty years ago? And yet sent you a sympathy card when your Father
    passed last month? It's your money, honey. Drink? I sling a mean
    singapore."
    -- Jack Moonlight
    --------------------------------------------------
     
    "This is it?" Jack swatted a mosquito on his left hand with the notebook
    in his right. The little fellow had been in the middle of lunch; now Jack had
    to switch hands , hold the notebook in his left hand, while he fumbled
    for the napkin he had saved from his own last meal at Lucky's Juke Joint
    & BBQ Emporium. He wiped his patron's bloody remains off his hand as
    Horace answered seriously Jack's rhetorical question.
     
    "S'wat the headstone say, don' it? 'Sides, I helped dig the grave.",
    Horace said, with a note of pride in his voice.
     
    Jack filed Horace's obvious dislike of D. Partlow, 1919-1952 in his
    medium-term memory banks as he looked around. The Negro Cemetery of Upper
    Pulaski County had its own entrance, on a road that led from the highway
    to nowhere else but a true dead-end. Here, as opposed to the white
    graveyard which it abutted, live-oaks and magnolias had been allowed to
    grow tall and wide. The shade touched nearly every grave at least part
    of the day. On their way back here, in a battery-powered cart driven by
    Horace, Jack had seen a white burial in process. The handkerchiefs were
    wet with sweat, not tears. The cart was quiet enough that the preacher's
    platitudes reached Jack's ears, as did his pause when a big rig gunned
    its engines on the highway that was certainly not foreseen when the
    graveyard was originally divided along color lines. It was peaceful,
    restful even, back here under the trees. Jack had no trouble hearing
    Horace Boulware's recitation of the deceased's faults.
     
    "...not that good a musician, couldn't sing worth a damn, 'less you
    count screamin' and moanin', that Howlin' Wolf garbage. Still, the gals loved
    him. Why, even when we were kids..."
    ------------------------------------------
     
    Euclidean, Mississippi, July, 1929
     
     
    "Hey Spoonbill! Yo' dog's followin' another trail". The old negroes on
    the porch of Mattie's store variously laughed, coughed, or slapped
    their knees at Grandy's witticism.
     
    William "Spoonbill" Geddie turned and looked at the boy carrying his
    guitar. He was holding it like a growed man, slapping the strings,
    eliciting a delighted laugh from a young light-skinned girl, pretty in
    her braids and a pink dress.
     
    "C'mon, dog. We got places to be."
    "Shawna Mae, see you around." Delano ran and caught up with his mentor.
    "She likes me, Spoon. She was smilin' big and pretty."
    "She was laughin' at you, boy, you thinkin' you can play that guitar
    already."
    "Maybe she was laughin' at your nose."
     
    Spoonbill unconsciously reached up and rubbed what had been a
    proper proboscis before it was flattened by a jailer's boot a few years back.
    Untreated, the cartilage had hardened with an inward curve and a
    depression above the nostrils, which now slanted out to the sides,
    looking for all the world like a chinaman's eyes.
     
    "That mouth gonna get you a funny nose one day, boy. Now keep up, and
    don't be letting the strap drag on the ground."
     
    Spoonbill was proud of his strap, with its American flag motif. He found
    it in a shop in Poitier, France, where Negro soldiers were allowed in
    all the stores, could walk in the front entrance like a man, tip their
    campaign hats to the mam'selles. Why, they could even look the ladies
    straight in the eye, if that was what you wanted to look at, that is. As
    many french gals touched black skin for the first time in those
    years as members of his own 25th Infantry did the same with white
    skin. Several men in his company stayed in France after the war to touch
    more, and to live as equals, a privilege denied them in the country of their
    birth, the country many friends had died for. William wished sometimes
    that he had stayed In France, and got to talking about it to little Delano
    when he'd had a few.
     
    "We gotta burn it if touches the ground, like the flag?", the boy asked.
    "Burn you, boy. That's what we gon' do, you let it drag."
    "I won't. We goin' to the park, Spoon?"
    "Yessuh, pup. I'm gon' play, you gon' dance, and we'll make a couple
    dollars before Sheriff Tully says move on. Then off to Uncle Whitey's
    to get a bottle of hooch for me, and I'll give you a nickel so's you can
    run back to Mattie's, get a Barq's. You can split it with little Shawna
    Mae."
     
    A car cruising by, one of the few in town, caught Delano's attention. It
    was Dr Hatton's 1925 Model T, the Open Tourer. The Doc was taking his
    kids to the lake for the day. His boy grinned shyly at Delano from the
    back seat. Delano grinned back, gave a little wave. He didn't know the
    white boy's first name. Doctor Hatton treated sick black folk on
    Tuesdays, and stitched up black knife-wounds on Saturday mornings when
    need be. But he wouldn't let his young-uns mix with Negroes, not even a
    little. Delano accepted this as just the way things were.
     
    "Spoon? I'm gon' have me a car like that someday."
     
    "Yeah boy. Prob'ly be that same car, after it's rusted up and the
    seats are worn to the springs."
    "You think I could get two nickels, Spoon? Shawna Mae might be thirsty
    'nuff to want her own cola."
     
    "We'll see. You dance real good, promise not to sing along, I might give
    you a quarter. Then you can buy a magazine, do all that readin' you like
    so much."
     
    "Why can't I sing?"
    "'Cause you cain't, boy.", Spoonbill sighed. " 'Cause you cain't".

Comments (13)

  • joiwinds

    You just keep getting better and better! Now post the rest of it!!!

  • doahsdeer

    Having just spent the last 48 hours drinking and talking mystery with other readers and writers of the mystery genre I'm too fried to read right now, but I'll have another drink and stop back later to read this post.  

  • MelFamy

    @doahsdeer - Man, and I thought my job was cool.


    I am almost finished reading The Yiddish Policeman's Union, by Michael Chabon. It's a pretty good mystery. Then I am starting A Minor Case of Murder. Damn! I just realized how close my working title is to your title. Now I have to come up with something equally clever/appropriate/attention-getting. 

  • twoberry

    Forgive my sleepiness in this comment.  I liked the writing -- colorful, and what the hey I just love occasional alliteration -- but I was getting the Spoons mixed up.  Spoonbill's a different cat from Spoondog/Spoonboy/Delano, right?  And I hate taking Spoonbill's word for the fact that Delano couldn't sing when he was 10.  Did the kid get any better before he died?


    I shouldn't comment when I'm this sleepy.

  • MelFamy

    @twoberry - You got it right, sleepyhead. But I will look back and see what I can do to clear up the confusion. Going forward, all I can say is that it won't be a problem much longer. As to the singing, many hate the vocals of Joe Cocker and Tom Waits, while others, such as myself, would gladly sacrifice small animals to them. I intend to address the stratification of music into categories in later chapters. It will be more fun than it sounds.


    I may have to drop the back-and-forth in time conceit, and tell the story in a more linear fashion.


    Thanks for the input.

  • godfatherofgreenbay

    I really enjoy your writings and I love this concept.

  • MelFamy

    @godfatherofgreenbay - I hope I can keep you interested. And no one on Xanga covers celebrity goings-on as well as you do.

  • doahsdeer

    I'm enjoying this.  Looking forward to reading more.

  • jsolberg

    Hope they mention in the Times how all the dialogue/dialect is so consistent and convincing, and, (unless you run and hide like Salinger), you get a chance to explain how you happen to have such a knowing grasp of so many milleus(?) . (And how come you be hanging out wid a guy what cain't spell, haha.)

  • MelFamy

    @jsolberg - I went to school with both blacks and whites that talk like my characters.


    I worked at a factory for a couple of years, and one day a black lady came up and asked me. "Hey! You mad?"


    I thought maybe I had a look on my face that she misinterpreted, so I replied. "No I'm not mad, not at all."


    "No, not mad. Ma'id! Are   you   Ma'id? She slowed her speech like she was talking to a slow child. and it still came out the same. I finally realized I was being asked if I was married.  "No Ma'am, I ain't ma'id."


    "OK, we was all just wondrin' if you ma'id." Satisfied, she returned to her station. Never did set me up wit' no date.

  • ItsWhatEyeKnow

    Very smooth read.  Believable characters.  I'm lucky I don't have to wait for you to write the next bit, I just have to find my next chunk of time to read on.  I'm looking forward to it!

  • Jimbow53

    Hey these guys were at Rutherford HS....

  • MelFamy

    @Jimbow53 - You are the only person reading this who could have discerned the source of many of my character's  names. I mixed it up a bit, Partlow was a girl, Peggy. Frank Hatton was a head, I will have to tell you about some of the stuff he pulled after high school. Boulware was in our gym class. I traded comics with Daryl Hokanson. But I just used the names, nothing to do with how I felt about the people themselves.

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