Tuesday, 30 June 2009

  • A MINOR BLUES, CHAPTER TWO

     


    I got too much of nuthin', can't handle any more
    I got too much of nuthin', can't handle any more
    Now the sheriff wants to see me, he's a knockin' on my door

    Too Much of Nuthin' --D. Partlow

    Not a bad picker, Jack, thought, but Barney Fife could sing Spoondog
    under a table. The pitch wavered, his voice cracked like a 13
    year-old's, and there was little emotion to match the lyrics. The
    tune itself was a standard blues, must be hundreds of songs like it.

    Jack pulled out the CD marked 'Spoondog', put in the one marked 'Field
    Recordings, Clarksdale, MS., 1933'. He forwarded past 'Pick' Bayles-
    Got
    a Solution, I Just need a Glass
    , past Jonah Wails' Wailin' Again Blues,
    and let song #3, If Trouble Knew Me, by one William Geddie, play.

    If trouble knew me better, I wouldn't be in chains
    If trouble knew me better, she wouldn't cause me so much pain
    Once trouble gets to know me, I think we could be friends

    I never looked for trouble, it just seeks me out
    I never looked for trouble, but trouble's all about
    I swam in trouble's waters, and got hooked like a trout

    Oh trouble, why do you do me so doggone mean?
    You and luck gang up on me, I got nobody on my team
    Cut me some slack, trouble,give me a another chance
    I wish I'd never met you, I wish I'd stayed in France

    As bad as the recording was, probably done in a cotton field, Jack could
    feel Spoonbill's pain, his weariness, his longing for a better place.

    Two days Jack had spent in the library in Hattiesburg. There he had
    found a treasure trove of information, which is how he had learned of
    Delano's mentor/father-figure. The historian had let him burn some songs
    and interviews onto several discs. He had even found a photograph of the
    two, Geddie (no mistaking that nose) playing guitar, and Delano, maybe
    nine or ten, dancing. Both were smiling as a well-dressed black man
    dropped a coin into the open guitar case. There were several whites in
    the crowd, including a young boy about Delano's age.
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    October 19, 1930

    Hey boy look at your shirt
    It done got smeared wit' Miss'ippi dirt
    Hey boy, where's your shoes
    gon' blister dem feet, dancin' dese blues

    Delano sang his part

    Dat's okay Spoon, I don' care
    feels so good i'se walkin' on air

    It was a good day. They were back in Euclidean, after working the cotton
    fields up towards Kosciusko. Sheriff Tully was nowhere to be seen, the
    October air was cool, even at three in the afternoon. The after-church
    crowd was feeling generous. There was even a yankee photographer there
    taking pictures as they performed. Spoonbill was glad he had relented,
    and let the boy sing some. In spite of, or maybe because of his atonal
    voice, people were charmed. Their tips had near about doubled
    wherever they played of late.
    Reverend Martin threw a quarter into Spoonbill's guitar case. It
    bounced once, and disappeared into a tear in the lining. A crumpled
    dollar followed. Spoonbill followed the dollar's arc back to the hand
    from which it was thrown. It was Frank Hatton's hand. The boy never said
    much, but he was always good for a buck or two of his daddy's money.
    More changed clinked and rattled in the case. It was raining money.

    "Bless you, young man. Thank you sir. Ma'am, thank you so much. Boy! Say
    Thank you, like I schooled you." On cue, Delano said, "Thank you, like I
    schooled you". The crowd laughed. From the edge of the gathering, Grandy
    remarked, "Lookee dere, Spoon's dog lernt a new trick". Another round of
    laughter. Spoonbill started picking out an old
    'track lining' song he'd
    learned on the work farm. It was a good day.

    -------------------------------------------

    Jack hit the pause button, started to talk, then decided to wait until
    the road straightened long enough to pass the tractor in front of him.
    The green-and-yellow behemoth had kept him below thirty for the last ten
    minutes. He got his chance and hit the rented Grand Prix's accelerator,
    felt that satisfying push of G-force pressing him into the seat, and glided
    around the International Harvester, the chains on the discing attachment
    rattling as the old machine bounced down the road. Money was no object,
    she had said, she being one Melissa Harshbarger, his client du jour. Du
    month, actually. Jack had figured when he talked to her earlier, with
    his latest progress report, she might be inclined to call him off the
    case. Happily, she was still willing to spend her estranged hubby's
    money on this snipe hunt, this search for a secular grail.

    Jack had called his client an hour ago, while there was still a tower to
    receive his signal. He explained to her his doubts about the likelihood
    of Partlow's residing under the oak trees of Upper Pulaski County.

    "The guy I talked to said it was a closed casket ceremony, naturally. No
    relatives, no friends, just a minister and two mourners from the local
    A.M.E. church. The cemetery records were destroyed several years ago. I
    couldn't find any mention in the archives of the town paper, and no
    coroner's report." I did find a death certificate, unsigned, at the
    County Hospital, no attending doctor or administrator mentioned. Cause
    of death was listed as accidental burning." He listened for a moment. "I
    agree, Ms. Harshbarger, one man dying two deaths by fire is weird.
    Sorry, Melissa it will be. Yes, I am on my way there now. I will call
    you once I find out anything either way. You too, Melissa. Good day."

    Jack tried to picture Melissa as they talked. He saw her sitting at the
    same barstool, swirling a swizzle stick in a cocktail glass as he gave
    her his latest report. A green sundress to match her eyes, emerald
    earrings. Open-toed sandals with glittery stuff on the straps. He
    wondered if she was handling the break-up of her marriage well, if they
    might get to have another drink together....


    THREE WEEKS EARLIER....

    Jack had seen nicer houses, but never from an interior vantage point.
    The foyer was as big as his office, the living room as big as his parent's
    yard. As Mrs. Harshbarger walked across the marble floor to greet him,
    the sound of her footsteps echoed off the walls and the three-story
    ceiling. The maid who had let him in disappeared without a sound. "Gotta
    be the shoes.", Jack thought inanely.

    "Mr. Moonlight, I'm Melissa Harshbarger. I'm so glad you could come on
    such short notice." Jack took the proffered hand, which could have been
    designed by Fabergé, in his, which in comparison could have been one
    tossed aside by Dr. Frankenstein.

    Jack looked around once more before replying, "No problem at all. I
    never miss a chance to play a little handball."

    Her laugh was spontaneous and unaffected. "Father had mentioned you
    were a bit of a smart-ass. I see he had you pegged."

    "I'm sorry. Did I know your Father?"

    "You testified in a case in which he was a defendant. Westberry v.
    Hatton. Apparently, it was your testimony that cost him quite a sum."

    Jack remembered the case. It was actually Westberry v. Hatton, et.al.
    One of the et als was Puma Pharmaceutical Sales, and they had sold Dr.
    Hatton a batch of Mexican knock-offs of a cancer drug that were of
    insufficient dosage. Jack had been hired by the plaintiff's lawyer to
    follow the paper trail back to Mexico, and prove the drugs were not part
    of a legitimate shipment. He had done so, and when he testified, the
    defense tried to discredit him by bringing up Jack's predilection for
    wagering on the horses. Not only did Jack fail to be discomfited, he
    knew for a fact that the lawyer questioning him used the same bookie.
    When Jack mentioned that fact, plus the name of the horse, Fairweather's
    Friend, on which they had both lost a bundle, the poor guy was
    visibly shaken. When Jack got dismissed, he asked audibly if the
    rattled attorney had heard any good tips lately. The courtroom burst
    into laughter, except for the defense table and the judge, who pounded
    his gavel and got the proceedings back on track. But it was over. Two
    Puma executives went to jail, and Dr. Hatton, though cleared of criminal
    liability, was found negligent, culpable and several other expensive
    words.

    Later, in the cafeteria, Judge Hammell thanked Jack for giving him a
    chance to bang the gavel. "But don't give me another in my courtroom,
    understand?"


    "So why recommend me?", Jack asked his prospective client. "I wasn't
    that funny."

    Again with the laugh. "Father said if I ever needed a good PI, to call
    you. He said you followed the trail that his lawyer's investigators
    could not. Had they done their job, there would have been a settlement
    reached out of court, less embarassment, and much less costly." A little
    glow left her face as she continued. "Father died two weeks ago. And now
    I find myself in need of your services. Come with me, please."

    Jack followed her into a den of sorts. He wasn't sure of all the names
    rich people used for rooms that the unwashed rabble had no need for. But
    there was a bar, and Jack was waved toward a pair of stools. He took
    one, and checked out the single-malt selection while Mrs. Harshbarger
    settled her sophisticated self into the other. She slid a letter in his
    direction, indicating that Jack should read it.

    "Sorry for your loss of your Father. I have lost a good friend. I would not
    be writing this had Dr. Hatton not saved my life. More to follow.

    Yours sincerely,

    Delano, although your father may have referred to me as
    Spoondog."

    Jack looked at the return address. Atlanta, Georgia. A P.O. box.
    He looked at the postmark. Hattiesburg, Ms. He looked at Mrs.
    Harshbarger.

    "Has more indeed followed, Mrs. Harshbarger ?

    "Please. Call me Melissa. I am divorcing, and will be taking my name
    back. And no, more has not followed."

    "Who, or what is Spoondog?"

    "A dead man, Mr. Moonlight. That much I know. Or thought I did."

    And she explained that her Father had known the struggling musician
    since childhood. That they had met once or twice over the years. Dr.
    Hatton had told his daughter little, except that in some way, he owed
    the man more than he could ever repay.

    "Once Father cried, Jack, when he was talking about Delano. He was drunk,
    which was a rare enough occurrence, and said that we all owed this man.
    He never explained what he meant, and he never mentioned him again."

    "And he's dead, or presumed so."

    She held up three fingers. "Three times he's died. The last time
    declared so by my Father. That was in 1955. I wrote to the Atlanta
    address. The account had been closed."

    "What do you want from me, Melissa?"

    "Find him, Jack. Money is not an issue. I want some answers, and I
    can afford to get them."

    Jack was intrigued, and also thirsty. He looked at the bottles lined up
    so beautifully, soldiers with their buttons polished, shoes shined,
    ready for inspection, willing to die for the cause, whatever it was. "
    Shall we seal the deal over a drink?"
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    Jack's audience was good at listening, but not much on feedback, so he
    put the recorder back in his shirt pocket, and gathered his thoughts.
    Spoondog was Euclidean's only celebrity, due to his one hit, "What's My
    Name?", an upbeat boogie recorded live somewhere in Georgia. Jack
    figured Spoon's fame might have cemented otherwise forgotten facts of
    his life in the minds of some of the older residents of the small town.


    The sign was so small Jack almost missed the turn. No 'Welcome to
    Euclidean', Home of the Least of the Delta Blues Singers
    . No 'Voted
    Best
    Barbecue south of Memphis'
    sign. Just 'euclidean 12 miles' on a post
    that pointed ambiguously toward either of two forks in the road.
    Furthermore, there was no gas station, nor a promise of one in either
    direction. Jack had passed the last chance for gas a good 45 minutes
    earlier, as the needle dropped under the quarter-full mark. Maybe a more
    economical, less fun car would have been the choice of a more
    economical, less immature private eye.
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Comments (10)

  • embrown88
  • joiwinds

    I'm really enjoying this story. Thanks for entertaining me! 

  • butshebites

    This was fun, I love the lyrics

  • godfatherofgreenbay

    Quite excellent, sir!  I am thoroughly enjoying this.  It is bringing back memories of my favorite Woody Allen movie, Sweet and Lowdown.

    I also think you are inspiring me to revisit a project that I worked on during college instead of memorizing my Luther or studying all the different modes of learning.  I was fascinated with the story of Leadbelly and tried to make that into a screenplay.

  • MelFamy

    @godfatherofgreenbay - An upcoming portion of this novel is inspired by his heavy-elemented self. I believe it was Leadbelly who was a polka fan. Muddy Waters drank champagne. Another bluesman, I forget who, studied the Greek philosophers. Gatemouth Brown hated Cubans, he told me so himself. He didn't say why, however, it had something to do with Miami. Many blues artists were complicated people, not the noble primitives the media portrays them as being.


    I thoroughly enjoyed Sweet and Lowdown, although Sleeper remains my favorite of Allen's oeuvre . Oeuvre is one of my favorite high-falutin' words, and one day I hope to learn how it is pronounced.

  • jsolberg

    a brave and scary project here, if you're posting-as-written day by day. You may yet need a fin-de-seicle deus-ex-machina to save your creative genius/butt in the last chapter.{Guess that's be 2099, so you got time.)


    And as usual, I started reading this chapter and (what's the on-line replacement term) couldn't put it down. "couldn't mouse it out"? Some really choice and clever turns-of-phrase here. Maybe I'll MSG you with a list of 'em, if I can control my blood-pressure.

  • MelFamy

    @jsolberg - I am going to make every attempt not to write myself into a corner.  I am working from an outline of sorts, but these characters have minds of their own.


    Also, I do not know yet if I will post the entire story on Xanga. I may post somewhere else, perhaps on MySpace, and provide a link to follow as I write. Or provide an e-mail addy , so people can request a link if they are interested enough. Boethius had it so much easier; all he had to do was sit in his cell and write by dim light, using his own blood as ink.


    Please do msg me. I like to know what works and what doesn't.

  • jsolberg

    Boethius worked to a dead-line, which also possibly inspired brevity. In contrast, I'm praying to my secret byzantine gods that your novel will go on forever and ever, amen. I personally vote for 'full-disclosure' right here. Myspace gives me scurvy, the yaws, beri-beri and all other divers evil-humours. MSG only makes my forehead sweat. I can handle that, and will send detailed kudos on your Lebens-Werk, whatever that is, ha

  • Jimbow53

    Digging the story... change his birthdate to 1900.. I am thinking he is a black WWI vet (1917-1918).



    James

  • MelFamy

    @Jimbow53 - Spoonbill, the older Spoon, is a ww1 vet. I read a story about how some of the black soldiers would slip behind enemy lines, and cut the throats of sentries with razors. And Ken Burns' documentary about Jazz mentioned how the black soldiers felt more welcome in France than the US.


    Given your impressive knowledge of all things Heer und Waffen, I expect you will have a few quibbles with certain events later in the story. 


    Welcome to xanga, my old friend. I encourage you to visit the sites of some of the other commenters here. Many of them have influenced and encouraged me.

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