I know the challenge, which you met as well as mortals can. I see sunrises here which beg for a 'Comment'. Don't usually feel sufficiently Japanese before a couple beers though. Like the dual-use 'down', and the driving power of the final line. Still, It's a constrained format. My luck the perfect word will have too many or too few syllables Or maybe I'm still pissed about Dec 7. We're kinda big on the 'long memory'.
I need to write more I never seem to have time Must stop all the porn
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I like your haiku.
Were they chem trails or just regular clouds? Ya gotta be more specific on these things. How about writting an Ode to Chemtrails.
@gvnuphope -
such innocents once
gamboling behind bombers
without barium
I know the challenge, which you met as well as mortals can. I see sunrises here which beg for a 'Comment'. Don't usually feel sufficiently Japanese before a couple beers though.
Like the dual-use 'down', and the driving power of the final line.
Still, It's a constrained format. My luck the perfect word will have too many or too few syllables
Or maybe I'm still pissed about Dec 7. We're kinda big on the 'long memory'.
I need to write more
I never seem to have time
Must stop all the porn
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